Hi, my name is Salomon Marcos and this is my music portfolio for the ASEM course “Writing About Music” with Brad Benz. This course is focused on 4 major assignments during the spam of this one-month course. Each assignment is used to understand the different aspects of music criticism. All three assignments are called WP#1, WP#2, and WP#3. The fourth assignment is called Portfolio. The first assignment (WP#1) was an annotated playlist. We had to choose an artist and analyze their top 8-10 songs that describe the artist the most. I choose The Pet Shop Boys. This band consists of a boy duet that was very popular around the world and specifically in the UK. I choose this band because this was all my parents listen to when I was growing up so I got molded into this type of old-school music. The Pet Shop Boys have a lot of songs but I specifically choose these 8 songs because all together they describe this boy band perfectly.
The second assignment (WP#2) was called a Desert Island Disc. This assignment basically meant that if you were to be stranded in a desert island for the rest of your life, what album would you take with you and why? I choose the album “Teenage Dream” by Katy Perry. I choose this album because this album has all my happiest and at the same time saddest and reflective memories I had as I was growing up in my teenage years. The third assignment (WP#3) in this class was called Live Review. This assignment consisted of going to a live concert of your choosing and then writing a live review of this concert. I choose to go to the Jonas Brothers concert due to them being separated for over 8 years and this being their first tour together. The final assignment in this class was the Portfolio. This consists of putting together our 3 major assignments while two of those are revised by the notes Professor Benz said and writing a memo. Then we put all this into WordPress. The two pieces of literature that I am going to be revising are WP#2 and WP#3. I selected to review these two assignments because in WP#2 I was lacking that personal connection that the assignment needed. I added more personal pictures of me in my teenage years, as well as more links to the song lyrics and reviews that other people say about this album. In WP#3 I wanted to revise it due to the assignment being very fun to do because it involved going to their concert. I wanted to also re-organize my WP#3 because it was little bit confusing to understand its structure. In both of this WP’s I also added an extra round of editing. By revising WP#2, when the reader goes through it, they can now put themselves in my shoes and understand what my emotions and feeling were. I also added that personal connection that the reader can get by reading my WP. The links to reviews and lyrics added more credibility to the WP and an overall sense of research to the information being stated. By revising WP#3, the reader can now understand the assignment in a chronological order and the way I want them to understand them. I also changed the title to make it more appealing to the reader and added a few more key links and details to it. I can now say that both of this WP’s are re-vise the way I wanted them to be and it is going to make the reader understand them even better.
A) How does your portfolio reflect your personal experiences with music, and with writing about music to public audiences?
The only way to truly understand all types of writing about music is to add your personal experiences into the writing. In my portfolio, WP#2 is full of personal experiences that I have had with music. The album “Teenage Dream” by Katy Perry describes detail by detail by all my personal experiences and emotions that I had when I was growing up. This album has specific songs like “The One that Got Away”. This song reflects the time I dated this girl for 4 years and then we had to break up due to going to different colleges. Another example is the song “E.T and California Gurls” remind me of all the great times I had when I lived in California and all those happy moments that I had in those 3 years. I believe that by adding personal experiences to your writing you make it easier for your brain to connect your thoughts and the overall writing is just way better because it comes from things or emotions that you have experienced. My portfolio has a lot of connections to my personal experiences and emotions that I have experienced throughout my life.
B) How does your portfolio’s content reflect how you will approach music and music writing (your own and by others) in the future?
My portfolio has a lot of meaningful and deep writing. I reflect a lot on my emotions and what the songs mean to me personally. I also show my ability to see others people’s emotions and reactions to an artist. The content that I have has a lot of research. In WP#3 when I went to see the Jonas Brothers I could have only written about the concert, but I took that extra time and researched the background past and the why’s that are key to approaching all the angles. This is showed very deeply and it adds meaning and credibility to what you are saying so the reader can understand the writing better. In WP#1 I also reflect how I approach music overall. The Pet Shop Boys are an old band (to me). I had to go back into their old songs to get the full description of this band and not just the newer version of them. This approach to music writing gives you that credibility and extra step that also makes your writing better. Finally, my portfolio’s content reflects how I approach music by me choosing completely different music genre artist in all of my three WP’s. The deep analyzes of each of the different genre artists shows that I can approach ang kind of music due to me not staying only in one genre. I like all kinds of music and I can find my emotions in different genres of music as-well. This gives me a lot of versatility in the future when I listen to music and most importantly when I research and write about music. Overall, I think my portfolio reflects and tells you how I am going to approach music and music writing in the future.
C) What does your portfolio reveal about your understanding of how music and music writing connect with and influence the broader culture?
I think the only way to fully understand the type of music you are listening to is to see how it is affecting the people or culture. In my WP#3, 8 years ago when I first saw the Jonas Brothers, they were not only singing their songs they were shaping their fans and starting an influence in the culture. I can state this for a fact because 8 years later, I saw the fans show all kind of emotions (tears of joy, smiles, waves, kisses) towards the Jonas Brothers being back together and doing what they do best. This music influenced this culture of the teenage girls who saw them 8 years ago coming back and seeing them at their 20’s-30’s. By understanding how the Jonas Brothers influenced a broader culture, you can see that music has way more meaning than just lyrics and having a nice voice. Music writing is a litte different the way it affects culture. In WP#1 the way I write and phrase myself is focused on how The Pet Shop Boys influenced culture in the UK. I explain how they changed this culture and the influence they had. By being a music writer, you also help the listener understand the emotions they are going when they hear the song and then the writer can see how the listeners reacted. When I wrote my portfolio, I was focusing on not just writing about each artist but to explain how each different type of music affects a person emotionally and an creates an impact in a specific culture.
Music is one of the biggest attributes that a person has invented. It can affect your mood, change your feelings, or make you do something that you wouldn’t normally do. This effect of music on us is very magical. Music is just not writing lyrics and singing, it is more than that. It can shape you to be the person you are today, it can help you understand things that you did not know about yourself, and it can help you through your toughest times. My portfolio shows many examples of how music can affect a person and the deeper meaning of it. I hope that by reading this portfolio you can get to appreciate how music affects everyone of us.

























